Saturday 13 July 2019

Short Poem - Brunner Mine

4 comments:

  1. hi Mitchell. I like the way you made make sense. Next time add a little bit more detail. By: Piper Bailee and Autumn.

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  2. Kai ora Mitchell.A i like how you put names of people and added backgrounds

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  3. Thanks Piper & Bailee & Autumn for the suggestion.

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